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Friday, March 21, 2025

Bleak Street, 2109 – a short story

(Contains course language and intense violence.)

Bleak Street, 2109 – a short story

“Oakland Police! Open up!” Detective Wright shouted as he pounded his fist against the apartment door. “Mr. Lopez, we have a warrant. Open up!”

Trashed lined the corners of the corridor. Graffiti decorated the walls. Shadows of the barred windows spilled down the hallway. Syringes stacked like popsicle sticks by what little innocence remained in front of the opposite door. Light peaked around his partner, Detective Shepherd, and their uniformed officers – there for backup. Four badges in all. POLICE blazoned on their dark blue vests. Hyper-weapons activated and raised, each held close to their chests. Hearts pounded. But all were at the ready.

Detective Shepherd stood opposite of her partner who returned the gesture, “Javier Lopez. Police! We have a warrant!” Shepherd scanned the eyes of the uniformed officers. Then back at Wright. She whispered, “Activate body-shields. We have thirty seconds.” Another nod from each officer and Detective Wright. The confirmation to proceed with the next action.

Wright took a step back and loaded power into his foot. He was always the favored one to kick in doors since he was gifted with size thirteen feet. He launched his leg forward and smashed the door down. Splinters from the door frame scattered across the entry. Wright was first to take the charge. Shepherd behind him. The uniforms followed. Wright turned to his left with his weapon ready to take aim. Shepherd turned to the right. She scanned the nearby kitchen with her weapon in hand. They fanned out. The uniforms spread throughout the apartment. Wright continued to announce their presence, “Javier Lopez!” No one was in the living room. Lines of blow textured the coffee table. A red sofa with ancient bullet holes laid rotting like a corpse.

One of the uniforms cleared the kitchen. The other cleared the balcony. They continued their search. The lead officer backed by his partner. Shepherd now backed by Wright.

Shepherd approached one of the bedrooms with Wright in tow. Same strategy applied when they entered. The door was ajar. Shepherd slowly opened the door with her foot. A Hispanic man fitting their suspect’s description. He was halfway out the window. He looked back inside. He lifted his gun in their direction. The glare from behind the suspect pierced Shepherd’s eyes.

She shouted, “Put the gun down!” Her powerful Creole voice pounded across the room.

The suspect began to raise his weapon. She fired once. Javier’s shoulder flung back. Bone cracked. Blood gushed from the mouth of a tattoo skull.

Another shot rang out from behind Wright and Shepherd. A second suspect. The shot caused Shepherd to swivel in agony toward the door frame. Blood splattered across Wright’s face.

A shot from their prime suspect zinged passed Wright’s left ear. The mini-shockwave was deafening. Without hesitation, Wright took precise aim and fired twice. Javier fell backward from two chest wounds – away from his heart, if he had one. Blood drained down his white tank-top and covered more of his tattoos. The look of shock filled his eyes. The look of regret filled his face. Not from guilt. From getting caught. Wright kicked Javier’s gun away – toward his partner.

At the same time the detectives were preoccupied, the uniforms had one more door to open before heading down the opposite hallway. Again, the same strategy applied. One officer at the ready to open the door. The other stood like his training at the range. Door opened. A second suspect fired several rounds. All missed the uniforms or absorbed by their shields and deadened.

One shot echoed from behind Wright. Another shot hit Shepherd. Instead of absorbing the shot, the shield only slowed down the inevitable for a fraction of a second. And then the shot found a path above Shepherd’s vest.

Both uniforms fired upon the second suspect. Multiple shots to the chest. Blood fountained from his mouth as he fell. His body spilled blood on the floor like a squeezed sponge.

Shepherd had slid down the door frame. Her shield deactivated. She clutched her shoulder. Applied pressure to the wound. She managed to switch her weapon to her injured arm.

Wright shouted at one of the uniforms, “Call it in! Officer down! Two suspects injured!”

One officer complied but reported, “Make that one suspect injured.”

The other uniform took point at the entrance to the opposite hallway. And waited for orders.

The first suspect was in no condition to retaliate.

Wright leaned down to his partner, “Help is on the way.”

She briefly gazed at her wedding ring. And then returned her focus on the assailant. “I’m alright,” she pointed her weapon at Javier. “I’ll keep an eye on him.”

A muffled scream came from the second bedroom, opposite from where Wright and the other uniform stood. Wright redirected his weapon down the hallway. He nodded at the uniform. The officer mirrored in acknowledgement and aimed his weapon at the cracked door. The second officer covered Shepherd. Just in case there were others unaccounted. Wright kicked the door open but remained back. “Show yourself!”

“Not a chance, pig!” A third suspect shouted. The muffled scream became a grunt. Female.

Wright looked over at the uniform. His face. He read his face. The uniform did the same. He nodded. Wright rushed the room with the uniform at his back. The uniform turned to the left then to the right. The detective was now faced with a dilemma. And all shields were down.

The third suspect held his hand firmly over the mouth of a little girl. His gun pressed into her skull, “I kill her!” He snarled. “Let me go, or she dies.” He gave him the evil eye.

“Let her go,” Wright ordered. “You don’t want to hurt anyone,” he calmly added.

A faint voice from the master bedroom barely made it into the second bedroom, “No las lastimes,” Javier repeated. “Diego, don’t hurt her.” His voice faded.

“Who is she? Diego. Is this Javier’s little girl? He wouldn’t be too happy if you killed her. After the doctor’s patch him up – well, you may find a shank in your gut once you get to Folsom, or worse, Quentin.”

From the doorway, the uniform had a clear bead on the third suspect’s head.

Wright stole a quick glance at the uniform and shook his head and quickly redirected his attention on Diego, “Hey! You’re looking at three to five for the coke. Don’t add murder to the charge.” He stared at him with a glare of finality.

“Comer mierda!” Diego sneered. A look greater than hate – indifference.

He slowly moved to his right. Closer to the third suspect. The third suspect followed him with his eyes. His head did not move. The uniform shuffled to the left, further into the bedroom. Wright had a decision. Risk the little girl’s life. Or further diplomacy. He attempted the latter one more time, “Release the girl. Tell me where Esposito is, and I’ll tell the D.A. you cooperated. Get your sentence reduced. What do you say?”

“No deals, pig!” He increased the pressure of his gun into the little girl’s head. She winced in pain and muffled a cry for help. A bleak cry for help.

“Let her go! Or I'll take you down. How’s that for a deal?”

The scream of sirens filled the streets outside. Hyper-gun smoke filled the air. The little girl tried to scream. The sunset began to peer through the blinds. It reflected off of the uniform’s badge. The beam of light glared into the third suspect’s eyes and blinded him. He removed his hand from the little girl’s mouth and reached for his eyes. Wright took action. He lunged for the little girl and snatched her from the clutches of the snake. The snake recoiled as he lunged his gun in the direction of the uniform. The officer instinctively fired two shots. One to the head. The other to the chest. The snake’s head was crushed. Blood and brains spewed onto the wall behind him.

The little girl clutched Wright’s legs and cried a stream of fear and relief. The light from the sunset shown upon his chest like the spotlight of a performing stage.

He gave the little girl to the uniform to watch her. The uniform took her away from the bleak horror that continued to spill onto the bedroom floor. She continued to thank them both as they waited in the kitchen.

Back in the master bedroom Wright double-checked his partner who confirmed she was alright. He knelt down next to Javier and applied pressure to his wounds, “EMTs are almost here. Should I have them attend my partner first or you?”

Javier attempted to spit at the detective, “You can’t do that. I have rights.” He muttered.

“I’m thinking, you tell me where I can find Esposito and – the EMTs attend to you first.”

Shepherd added, “He’ll do it too.” She went along with his bluff.

“Go piss yourself,” Javier blurted with blood spewing through his teeth.

Wright turned to his partner, “What is it with these assholes? They all have some sick fascination with shit and piss.”

Before Wright could grill Javier again, the EMTs arrived. Four of them. Two immediately attended to Shepherd. The other two to Javier. Within minutes they were able to stabilize both. Javier took a bit longer. 

Wright turned toward the backup officers, “Read him his rights.”

Shepherd declined a gurney as Javier was wheeled out to the hallway toward the elevator.

Someone from Social Services arrived moments later. Before they took the little girl away, Wright knelt down beside her, “¿Como te llamas?”

“Gracia,” she softly replied.

He smiled at her. The kind of smile he’d give his own daughter.

Out in the parking lot, the ambulance with Javier drove off. The Crime Scene Unit arrived with other uniformed officers and headed upstairs. Just before a second ambulance drove Shepherd to the hospital, she asked Wright, “Think he’ll talk?”

“After he’s patched up, we’ll question him in the box. Sooner or later, he’ll talk.”

And with that, the ambulance doors shut and drove off. As they stood on the corner of Bleak Street and 7th Avenue, the media had gathered. Drone cameras circled the neighborhood.  A crowd had gathered behind the marked and unmarked cruisers that whispered while parked. Some of the crowd taunted the police. One demonstrator slammed his fist into one of the cruisers. The vehicle’s defense system shocked the man into compliance and ran off in fear of arrest.

One of the uniforms guffawed and quickly returned to his job.

Wright caught the attention of the officer who shot Diego, “Good job up there.”

“Just doing my job, sir.” By now, the officer had removed his vest.

The detective took a closer look at his shiny name badge, “Officer Davis. Thanks for having my back. By the way, your first shot – did you miss?”

“Sir?” Davis tilted his head back as a realization, “I didn’t intend to—” he stopped.

“It’s understandable. In the heat of the moment—”

“I didn’t have time to – the girl was all I could think about.”

“And – you saved her life,” he firmly placed his hand on the officer’s shoulder.

Officer Davis quickly looked up at the twilight sky, the flickering street light, and then back at Detective Wright, “Sir, I believe we had help from above today.”

With a deep exhale, Wright nodded, “I think you’re right. I think – you are right.”

~

Sincere thanks to Retired Oakland Police Officer Kenneth Douglas as a special consultant. 


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